A little writing experiment here. I was so taken with this new Facebook feature today—the ability to turn a profile into a memorial after someone dies, and the info that Facebook asks for in the process—that I just felt 100% compelled to write something. No time to do a full story, so I dashed off a quick scene, a setup.
(You can skip straight to it if these process notes don’t interest you.)
The fun part is that I asked people for some quick feedback on Twitter and wow—they delivered! Using this form, I got sixteen really thoughtful responses in a matter of minutes. (I’d show them to you, but I never indicated to my on-demand reviewers that their responses would be made public, so I’m going to honor the assumption of privacy. Seriously, though: so thoughtful.)
None of the feedback said “meh” or “blech” so I decided to spend just a bit more time on it and address some of the problems that people identified. I am not assuming that anyone will actually want to compare these, but just for the sake of sharing the process: here’s v1 in Google Docs, the result of about 40 minutes of rushed typing; and here’s v2, with about another 40 minutes of work put into it.
Anyway, I’m not suggesting this is great literature, but I had fun with the process, and I actually think there’s something interesting about being able to “metabolize” stuff that’s very in-the-moment and make a story (or story-stub) out of it. And that really means being able to ask for feedback, and get it, in near-real-time.
I wish I could keep writing this story—I’m curious to know what happens next—but I’ve got to finish this book and I’ve already spent an irresponsibly large amount of time on this today.
Anyway! Enough meta-discussion. On to the story-stub.
Read on…